EASTER- Hanging on the wind

aw, 8 hours isn't that lonng xD~~ i worked on one piece for over 2 months >_>;; *shot*
anyways, this isn't about me. it's about this piece <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>~ first off, the colours are very nice, and i like her dress and hair. We'll start off with the person part of the drawing though, and work our way though <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>. the first thing i noticed was that she doesn't look like she's balanced. she actually looks like she's going to tip over very soon. find her center of balance, which is a middle line that divides her weight-wise in half, and her feet should be positioned equally around it. right now, she looks like she's tipping over to her right. the ankles are a bit wonky too, as the ankle actually protrudes out a bit from the calf, but your ankle just curves into the feet, therefore giving a feel of lacking-an-ankle, especially for her left foot. now the other thing you should watch out for when doing something like the eggs is that you have to space them more unevenly. right now, everything (except for a few places) looks a bit eavenly spaced, so it looks kind of unatural (to me, unless you're going for that effect). have more overlap for the eggs, or things like that (am i explaining myself right? D:...i can't tell anymore). lastly, the clouds look a bit unnatural too. i think using references will help <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> [link] as you can see, the edge of clouds are not the darkest usually, as it fluffs out. clous also look smaller when it's closer to the horizon. so the further away from the horizon a cloud is, the closer it is to YOU, therefore it's bigger.
aaanyways, the colours are pretty nice, and it's very cute, so kudos. keep drawing and practicing, and i think i've said enough xDD;;;